sir....
i think about donnie darko for some reason. but grats on that. cause i love that movie. this tune is dark and mysterious. i usually dont listen to this kind of music because it makes me depressed haha. but all in all....this goes good with a lot of ideas. but most of them death [hence..the dark side] what i see is a man walking up to a little kid [his kid maybe] and watching him take his last breath with a little tear going down his face. but is satisfied and not really heart broken because his son/daughter accomplished a task by making a sacrificing decision...idk..just what i see.
keep up the work. you dont need to make it longer. this is perfect. 5/5 10/10